[Jade Callisto]

Aera

0 total points to distribute

Discipline	Stat Pts	MOD
STR	14	+2
DEX	12	+1
CON	15	+2
INT	4	-3
WIS	7	-2
CHA	10	+0

Dinah


0 total points to distribute

Discipline	Stat Pts	MOD
STR	4	-3
DEX	14	+2
CON	7	-2
INT	8	-1
WIS	15	+2
CHA	14	+2

Aera

HP: 170/170

SHIELD: 60/60

STATUS: None

Dinah

HP: 130/130

SHIELD: 35/35

STATUS: None


Appearance: 



Home Planet/Origin: Summon Night Swordcraft Story 2

Alignment: Neutral -- Good

Motto: "A Craft-Knight's promise is as strong as Steel!" 

Allies/Friends: Blaire, Orin, Rocky, Kara, Tatiana, Gabriel, Nina Nina, Toumei, Bryan, Sarin, Magna, Toris, Nesty, Amer, Kohina, Kuuya, Hasaha.

Enemies/Rivals: Ryouga, Lynn, Passeau, Goura, Guren, Gedharm.

Backstory: History

History On Li: After sealing away Goura back within the ruins outside of their town Aera had been relaxing near the fishing pond in town with her guardian beast named Dinah who had been floating above her waiting impatiently for Aera to get moving somewhere she deemed fun. Aera was fishing in the pond hoping to get a good catch so she could sell it to earn points for that she could buy materials with from the fisherman's house.

It was a peaceful day until suddenly Aera felt a tug on her line as if it was trying to pull her into the water with it's strength. "Dinah mind helping me out here?" she would ask her guardian beast that just looked away in frustration. "Hmmph! You are spending all day fishing and we aren't even practicing our combat skills."

Dinah would say before she was taken over by her angel side. "Oh sorry about her! She just wants some action even though we are in a time of peace." the angel side tried to explain as she took the rod in her hands and pulled on it with Aera. "I'll see if I can help." the angel side would say as the two did though they were soon going to realize it wasn't a fish that was biting but a strange portal that was sucking them in.

"W..what is that thing?!" Aera would ask as they were then pulled into the water and right into the portal before they could drown.

As they were pulled into the portal they coughed up some water as they splashed onto the hard ground beneath them. Dinah was back in her demon form and was now nagging at Aera for not just letting go of the line when she should have. "Where are we?" Aera would ask as she saw a strange domed city in the distance.

The angel side came out and said they need to ask around for where they were at that city. Aera nodded then headed towards that direction as she traveled to the city known as the Life Sphere.


Primary Attacks (3)

Craft-Knight's Promise: Being a craft-knight means to use your own materials to make different weapons in a means to attack your foes. Currently Aera can attack with six different types of weapons. Aera can use Swords, Spears, Axes, Claws, Drills and of course her trusty Hammer of which she makes the weapons with. All the weapons have different ranges and speeds but they can also vary from light combo-able attacks for 8% damage or a medium attack for 18% damage. [DMG 8-18%] [STR]

Aqua Tornado: Dinah appears in front of Aera and summons a tornado of water that is launched from Dinah's hands as it is fired forward as a large circular torrent of water at a single foe. [DMG 15%] [50% Soaked] [WIS]

Exeld's Lightning: Exeld, The Summon Beast of Lightning, lends Dinah his Element allowing her to use a lightning strike on a single foe for 22% damage. Using her forefinger she summons the bolt as it shoots downward from the sky toward the foe. Due to the feedback of using this new ability Dinah takes 4% damage recoil from using it. [WIS]

Special Attacks (3)

Aqua Enchant: Dinah appears above Aera as she grants the element of water to whatever weapon Aera has equipped at the time. This grants a +1d8 to damage dealt for 2 turns and is gifted to other allies as well. Attacks also have a 50% chance of inflicting Soaked status during this ability. Cooldown 2 turns.

Aqua Healing: Dinah floats over the user or to an ally to heal a small amount of health using water magic. Also has a 50% to cure Burn if inflicted with it. Uses the dice for a 1d15+Charisma Mod for a 3 turn cooldown. [Heal ??%] [CHA]

Mono-Shift: Using the power locked deep within her, Aera transforms using a gem known as the daemon gem, which is a small gemstone with a crimson red color that unlocks the power of the Edge Fencer within herself. This transformation lasts for 3 turns and gives a +1 MOD to all stats to Aera and a +5% damage boost as well. This ability has a 3 turn cooldown and inflicts 1 turn of Severe Exhaustion after the transformation runs out.



Final Smash (1)

Romantic Bomb: The devil girl and her angel side work together on a joint attack. First Dinah and her Angel side stand side by side as they begin the attack. Angel Dinah is summoned in the middle of the field as she creates a giant pink heart then Devil Dinah summons a giant tri-pronged spear then throws it down at the heart as it is impaled the heart explodes into many miniature hearts that blast foes in the surrounding area with them. [Area of Effect DMG 35%] [30% Charm]




Other Info: Dinah has split personality which is her Angel side of her usual Devil form. Aera is a blacksmith who crafts her own weapons with the help of Dinah. For travel Aera and Dinah just walk or use Dinah's water magic to fly.

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For starts, Dinah has 2 stat points missing. Add them as you see fit.

Aqua Enchant is not a Primary attack, as it follows more or less the guidelines for a Special attack. Please adjust accordingly. It'll also need a nerf, as a buff granted to all allies would be a bit too much, especially one that adds status ailment chances and damage buffs.

Romantic bomb is too powerful. Needs a longer cooldown, and a secondary negative effect like Recoil or something similar.

[Jade Callisto]

Everything should be all fixed up so please review it again.

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Sadly, still cant approve this App. Craft Knight Counter has the same issue that Aqua Enchant had previously, Its more of a Special Move than a Primary.

To quote 'Building your character':

"Primary moves are meant to be your most basic of attacks. Imagine if your character was an actual character in smash brothers. Your Primary Attacks would be the moves used at the push of an A button. They could be very open in their detail, to be used in a lot of ways."

"Special Moves on the other hand are meant to be much more flashy with a very specific use. They are like the B button moves from the game. Very specific in detail, being used mostly in only one way, but having much more than the average primary attacks to make them, well, Special."

The Counter here follows more closely with a special move than a Primary move, as it only has the one use, to block and counter

[Jade Callisto]

Hopefully this works better. Sorry for all the hassle! Craft-Knight's Hammer instead of Counter and Daemon Hammer added to the final smash.

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[Jade Callisto]

Some changes I would like to make to Aera and Dinah's Kit.

(Change to a move) Craft-Knight's Promise: Being a craft-knight means to use your own materials to make different weapons in a means to attack your foes. Currently Aera can attack with six different types of weapons. Aera can use Swords, Spears, Axes, Claws, Drills and of course her trusty Hammer of which she makes the weapons with. All the weapons have different ranges and speeds but they can also vary from light combo-able attacks for 8% damage or a medium attack for 18% damage. [DMG 8-18%] [STR]

(Replacement for Craft-Knight's Hammer) Exeld's Lightning: Exeld, The Summon Beast of Lightning, lends Dinah his Element allowing her to use a lightning strike on a single foe for 22% damage. Using her forefinger she summons the bolt as it shoots downward from the sky toward the foe. Due to the feedback of using this new ability Dinah takes 4% damage recoil from using it. [WIS]

(Replacement for Romantic Bomb) Mono-Shift: Using the power locked deep within her, Aera transforms using a gem known as the daemon gem, which is a small gemstone with a crimson red color that unlocks the power of the Edge Fencer within herself. This transformation lasts for 3 turns and gives a +2 to all stats to Aera and a +5% damage boost as well. This ability has a 3 turn cooldown and inflicts 1 turn of Severe Exhaustion after the transformation runs out.

(Replacement for Mono-Shift FS) Romantic Bomb FS: The devil girl and her angel side work together on a joint attack. First Dinah and her Angel side stand side by side as they begin the attack. Angel Dinah is summoned in the middle of the field as she creates a giant pink heart then Demon Dinah summons a giant tri-pronged spear then throws it down at the heart as it is impaled the heart explodes into many miniature hearts that blast foes in the surrounding area with them. [Area of Effect DMG 35%] [30% Charm]

[Jade Callisto]

Smash Spirit Rolls for Aera and Dinah

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[Mari]

Looks good!