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Discipline	Stat Pts	MOD
STR	12	+1
DEX	13	+1
CON	11	+0
INT	9	-1
WIS	12	+1
CHA	13	+1

Ness
Home Planet/Origin: Onett (Earthbound series)



Alignment: Neutral -- Good



Motto: "... Okay! Time to show how tough I am!"



Allies/Friends: Paula, Poo, Jeff, King, Tracy, Lucas, Luigi, Dedede



Enemies/Rivals: Porky, Giygas



Backstory:
wikibound.info/wiki/Ness (brief explanation)
wikibound.info/wiki/EarthBound (full explanation)





Appearance: 



History On Li: After the events of the Subspace Emissary, Ness hangs around in his world with his friends. He accidentally reached Li through a failed PK Teleport attempt when he tried to get back to Onett from Fourside. He was also first founded in Porky's Factory, but he left immediately to quickly forget about his friend, Porky, that betrayed him during his journey. He tried another attempt at PK Teleport once, but he ended up in the Life Sphere. Then he found out that he can't go back home. He thought it's no big deal, but it literally flip his cool when he found out that he can't call his mom.

With that, Ness gotten homesick ever since. With no way to talk to his mother, he venture around Li with a gloomy face. He hopes someday someone make a better phone line, or maybe a portal back home. Right now, he's trying to adapt into Li to prevent from breaking down.





Primary Attacks (3)

Punch and Kick: Punches twice, then kicks. (Deals 2%, 2%, then 4% damage)



Baseball Bat: Swings his bat. (will do 20% damage on the base and will do 22% damage on the tip. Will have a 2 turn cooldown.)  



Roundhouse Kick: Self explanatory. He will do a roundhouse kick. (Deals 10% damage)







Special Attacks (3)

PK Flash: A green plasma-like energy projectile appears above Ness. If he holds on longer, it will grow stronger. If he releases the energy, it will explode. (Deals 9%-32% damage. Will have a 3 turn cooldown. Ness will also have a stat decrease for strength by 2, making it 10 (mod. 0))

PK Fire: Fires a yellow, lightning-bolt shaped projectile that will burn the target. Works the same thing as Lucas', but no explosion. (deals 4% if hit. The target will have burn for two turns, this means Ness will have a two turn cooldown.)


PK Freeze:  Emits a sky blue snowflake-shaped blast of PSI energy. Inflicts less damage than Lucas' PK Freeze, but freezes opponents. (deals 10% to 19% damage. Will have a 4 turn cooldown.)







Final Smash (1):

PK Rockin': Ness will summon a red-yellow-blue large projectile that will explode when opponents got caught in the attack. (Will deal 20% to 40% damage for the explosion. It will depend on the damage taken by the opponent. The more damage the opponent has, the less damage it'll take. Kinda giving it a softer checkmate after being tortured long in a chess game, you know what I mean.)









Other Info: LUCAS NEEDS A FRIEND AMG. Anyways, I hope Ness' final smash and moves are not too OP and hope he's not a total clone ;w;

[Mari]

Alright~! Let's see...

I corrected Ness's INT modifier. It previous listed it as +0, but a stat of 9 is a modifier of -1. Think of stats in terms of 0 instead of 10. At 0, a stat has a modifier of -5. For every 2 above 0, it gains a +1.

Pk Flash
There's a base damage cap of 32% for any move. Additionally, once you exceed 30% damage cooldowns can no longer balance them. You'd need to give it a different self-penalty such as stat reduction in order to give it the okay.

Pk Fire
It has to be clear how much damage this attack ultimately does. Right now it doesn't specify that.

Pk Freeze
This would actually need a 4 turn cooldown to be legal. You could get away with as high as 17% damage with a 3 turn cooldown.

Pk Rockin'
Unfortunately we have no method of keeping track of distance. Aha. You'd have to think up something we can actually verify if you wanted to breach 40% damage.

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OH HEY I MADE MORE MISTAKIES THAN THE LAST APP I MADE. Guess I rushed it this time.
Time to fix em~

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Most stuff is now fixed. Ness has more cooldowns and PK Rockin' is tweaked. Well, this kid is powerful but he can't use his powers too much.

[Mari]

Looking good! Just one thing. For PK Flash, remember how I mentioned a 32% damage cap? That means no attack is allowed to do more than that basewise.

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Time to fix that as well~

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More quick changes! Ness' PK Flash is now less OP than it was~

[Mari]