[Maverick Hunter Zero]

Character Name: Ganondorf Dragmire

Home Planet/Origin: Hyrule/Gerudo Valley/Legend of Zelda series

Preferred Motto: "These toys are too much for you! I command you to return them to me!"

Appearance(Can be slightly different than the character choice):


Alignment: Lawful Evil

History On Li: Ganondorf, the Greatest evil in all of Hyrule, sought time and again to gain dominion of the Sacred Realm and all of Hyrule by obtaining the fabled Triforce, but was thwarted time and again by Link. Though all was not lost, for he still held the Triforce of Power when he was sealed in the sacred realm, vowing that when the seal broke and he was released, he would begin the extermination of those descended from Link and Zelda, though this came to pass as the eternally reincarnating Demise vowed, Link, Ganondorf, and Zelda were eternally linked by the curse Demise himself cast upon the two with his hatred for them continuously reincarnating into the man known as Ganondorf.

During the Subspace Emmisary event that would eventually merge all the worlds in which Ganondorf had been following Master Hand alongside Bowser, He was forced to help his sworn enemies in finally defeating Tabuu, he was never seen again for several years afterward, but had finaly surfaced in what remained of Hyrule after the creation of Li. Forced to abandon his home, He and his fellow Gerudo took up residence in the Life Sphere and he himself chose to take up residense in a Maximum Security Cell at the Police Station so as to keep himself from utterly destroying the town in search of his nemeses.

Ganondorf still holds the Triforce of Power, and is still evil to the core, still determined to conquer his homeland, and now more than ever, still determined to obtain the complete Triforce and use its power to utterly subjegate the entire planet!

Storied History: LINK 1/LINK 2

Stats: ( 10 ) total points to distribute

Discipline	Stat	Modifier
Strength	14	+2
Dexterity	3	-4
Wisdom	20	+5
Intelligence	14	+2
Charisma	6	-2
Constitution	14	+2

Primary Attacks(3):
- Jab: Ganondorf punches with a single fist, inflicting fair damage. STR Based{9%}
- Sweep Kick: Ganondorf charges up breifly and performs a kick that has good knockback and deals fair damage. STR Based{9%}
- Light Sword: Ganondorf slashes with the very sword used by the sages to run him through to great effect, inflicting moderate Light Element damage and good knockback. STR Based{18%}

Special Attacks(3):
-Energy Sphere: Ganondorf Charges energy in one hand and throws a ball of magickal energy at the opponent, the energy ball can be deflected back at him with a STR ROLL of 10 or greater with any modifiers added to the mix, though any lower than 10 will result in them taking damage, They must also be aware that Ganondorf can swat his own attack back at them to make it a sort of tennis game with the Energy Sphere, the Energy Sphere has a 45.5% chance of inflicting paralysis if either Ganondorf or the opponent fail to deflect the Energy Sphere. WIS Based{20%}
-Warlock Punch: Ganondorf does his own take on Captain Falcon's Falcon Punch, except with Dark Energy coursing through the attack instead of fire, Deals major damage, the Dark Elemental Energies causing an explosion that has a 45.5% chance of burning the target, If used while floating it creates a shockwave that knocks the enemy back. STR/WIS Based{20%}
-Heaven and Hell Skyward Strike: Using the Light Sword thrust to the skies, he channels light energy into it and unleashes it to attack the opponent, the second strike is a Demonic varient in which he channels his own dark energies into the blade then unleashes it in a low sweep to the opponent's legs to trip them up, both deal moderate damage and can punish those using reflective barriers and Bubble Shields. Has excelent knockback. WIS Based{19%}

Ultimate Attack(1):
Beast Ganon: Using the Triforce of Power, Ganondorf transform's into Ganon, once in this transformation, Ganondorf causes opponents fighting at a distance to flinch and those nearest him suffer a pitfall effect. When he charges at those facing him, the attack is a garaunteed massive damage for Bosses, and a paltry moderate damage for regular/infected characters and enemies, has superb Knockback and a very low Launch Rate unless the opponent is at close range. Transformation lasts for 1 turn due to the massive strain this transformation exerts on Ganondorf upon activation. STR Based{60%}

Allies/Friends:
Koume and Kotake{Twinrova}, Zant, Ghirahim, Cia, Vaati

Enemies/Rivals:
Link, Zelda, Impa, Sheik, The Sages, Bowser{Rival}, K. Rool{Rival}, Dr. Ivo 'Eggman' Robotnik{Rival}

Any Other Information:
-Ganondorf is the reincarnation of Demise's hatered for the Goddess and the Spirit of the Hero, no matter how many times Ganondorf is killed or defeated by Link, he manages to come back every time.
-Ganondorf can have his energy Spheres sent back at him with an empty bottle, one of the many goofy easter eggs ever exploited in the entirity of the Zelda Series.
-Ganondorf =and Ganon by extension= have the most appearances as FINAL BOSS characters in almost every Zelda Title to Date, the only exceptions are Adventure of Link, Minish Cap, Oracle of Seasons & Oracle of Ages{except through a linked game}, Link's Awakening/Link's Awakening DX, and Skyward Sword, the Second place spot going straight to Vaati.
-Ganondorf always starts Mission battles by floating in the air at least a foot off the ground, where certain Earth elemental Spells do very little damage though certain spells such as Gravity and Stalagmite still hit him regardless, in arena fights however he takes his fighting Stance from his Smash Bros. appearances.

[PolarStarQuote]

Alright, this app has alot of issues. First of all, your modifiers are off. 15 does not equal a +3 modifier, same as 17 does not equal a +4 modifier. As well, ganondorf's stats are a tiny bit skewed. Maybe take some wisdom points away and add them to intelligence, and it would be fine.



For your primary attacks, i don't see any real issue except i don't see why Light Sword is part strength and part dex as well. But, i suppose it would be somewhat expected for dex to play a part with swinging a sword around quickly, but it seems a little un-necessary for me. But, that's just minor.



The energy sphere attack is incredibly iffy. The strength roll of 10 is fine, but i will ask that you remove the {with no modifiers added} bit to it. Modifiers are a required field. Also, the energy sphere ignoring CON stat's is incredibly OP, so i will have to ask you remove that as well.



The heaven and hell skyward strike is fine, except for the part about them piercing reflective barriers and bubble shields. If you want to have a move that does extra damage against shield's, fine, but you cant have a move that outright ignores all defenses. I also don't see how this attack classifies as both a WIS based attack and a DEX based attack.



And now, the ultimate attack. Invulnerability to standard attacks? No, that is far too OP. Guaranteed critical for bosses? No. True, Dark pit's has the guaranteed crit on bosses as well, but his has more of a gimmick to it so there's a reason for it. Also, 3 turns seems a little excessive.
1 or 2 will be fine.


And finally, Ganondorf starting every battle floating. I don't mind the idea of ganondorf floating, but having him be immune to earth elemental spell's/attacks and can only be brought down by his own energy sphere attack? That's far too OP. Either remove it, or make him still able to take damage from these things.

Fix these listed issues, and we can try again.

[Maverick Hunter Zero]

thanks for the advice, edits made.

[PolarStarQuote]

Seems alright to me, just make sure that floaty-ness is something that can be sent down.

[PolarStarQuote]

Maverick Hunter Zero

Ganondorf has officially been Unapproved, Due to issues with his Backstory, Stats, Timeline and his Move sets.

Ganondorf needs to be defined as to what version of ganon he is, Twilight Princess, Hyrule Warriors, Windwaker, Ocarina of time, etc. Etc. Weve decided that ganon should not be able to have all canon's of Ganon in one, Which this ganon appears to be.

His Backstory's major problem is the fact that Ganon has locked himself in a Maximum Security cell, Which has begun to really make a joke of the life sphere police department. I understand what your going for here, but it also is Out of character for Ganondorf. Ganon would never lock himself in a cage, Being sealed away is directly what he fights against. So, This will need to be removed.

Ganondorf's WIS Stat is too high, And his STR is still too low.


And finally, Ganondorf's Warlock Punch and Energy Sphere both suffer the same issue of having too high a Status Effect chance and Damage with no downside. To be a move without Any downsides, It would have to be 20% Status Chance, and 10% Damage. It either needs massive recoil, cooldown, Stat debuffs for Ganondorf himself. Something. They are both too high. As well, There is no such thing as a .5% For status effects.

Also, Were gonna remove the Ganondorf floating above the ground so he takes little damage from earth attacks. Just no.